For this strenuous effort, the best way to conquer my shortcomings is my passion for this class, because only that passion can keep me motivated. For instance, even if I am exhausted or sick, my strong passion can protect me from becoming lazy in checking grammar or reading the book again. The first essay made me realize the importance of never losing my passion. If I hold onto that, I will increase my chances of writing a satisfactory essay. These efforts, passion and process in this class are not only for getting a good grade in the class but also for my future. The reason is that, unlike in the past, everyone can write their opinion in writing, even if all of them are not great writers. In other words, I maintain that expressing my thoughts in writing more logically and efficiently such as what I am learning in this class is increasingly important as time goes
For this strenuous effort, the best way to conquer my shortcomings is my passion for this class, because only that passion can keep me motivated. For instance, even if I am exhausted or sick, my strong passion can protect me from becoming lazy in checking grammar or reading the book again. The first essay made me realize the importance of never losing my passion. If I hold onto that, I will increase my chances of writing a satisfactory essay. These efforts, passion and process in this class are not only for getting a good grade in the class but also for my future. The reason is that, unlike in the past, everyone can write their opinion in writing, even if all of them are not great writers. In other words, I maintain that expressing my thoughts in writing more logically and efficiently such as what I am learning in this class is increasingly important as time goes