College admission officers have a tough job when it comes to sorting and reading millions of application essays. A student’s academic life depends merely on whether their essay is valuable enough to get acknowledged; therefore things need to be evaluated carefully. Although this applicant’s essay doesn’t necessarily state a clear academic goal in writing doesn’t mean there isn’t a goal in mind. Solely based on this student’s essay they would definitely be accepted into my university because they demonstrate potential, good character and diverse experience in communication which are highly praised in every student. Having potential in college is essential if not necessary because it helps give the extra push needed …show more content…
Despite the fact that nothing about their personality was actually clearly stated. However, they mentioned several things such as, translating for Cuban refugees, helping Amazon basin from ferocious army ants and even repairing electrical appliances for free. This surely can translate to someone of good personal standing and personality. Also having a person who is culturally educated is good because they also tend to be more socially acceptable and open-minded of all the different people one encounters. Having good character is important to gaining connections and opening opportunities for future references. On another note, it was once mentioned that children were good judges when it comes to deciding the character of a person since their blunt personalities always showed, so to have children trust this person says good things about …show more content…
They were able to notably present themselves in this paper to get me to accept them to my university. Communication can come in many forms and this person possesses excellent rhetorical skills, which helped them convey their writing ability very well and effectively to the reader. Maybe the abundance of idioms they used throughout the essay was just the trick to enhancing the quality of the essay. Throughout the essays they also had a variety of material mentioned such as bullfighting in San Juan, cliff-diving in Sri Lanka, spelling bees at the Kremlin, Hamlet, Moby Dick, and David Copperfield which means that this person is informed and knowledgeable in multiple subjects and material. This also ties in with them being culturally aware and diverse in experience. So to be presented with someone who can succeed in this is another reason why they would be invited to