Personal Narrative: Week 4 Reflection

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First and foremost I 'd like to apologize for just posting my Week 4 discussion post. I have been dealing with personal problems trying to keep home Internet services on, having to weekly job search and being diagnosed almost 3 weeks ago with Vertigo. I 'm feeling almost 100% better and a plan of action is to be caught up by the end of this Week 5.

For me to briefly detail my experience so far in the course have been a big transition. I 'm a person being too wordy, not clear, not understandable, not being distinct, hard to put my feelings on paper and something that should be so simple, I make it complex and find it hard to be as specific as possible. So far I enjoyed Writing with Purpose, Expository Writing, Making a Plan, Writing Elements, but I 'm still trying to make sense of Week 4 Comparing and Contrasting. I had
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I put my main idea on paper and draw a circle or box around it, then from my main idea I begin writing my own weakness and strengthens into words and placing circle or box around them. Last I draw arrows so I 'll be able to connect my ideas and prevent repetitive ideas, but build on supportive ideas as I begin to elaborate, which will consist of facts, reasons, examples and experiences; then I can begin to put ideas in the best possible order! The completion of my 1st draft with prewriting completed is what I could add to my toolbox.

A question I could think of, regarding contrasting and comparing as it relates to creating either a personal or narrative essay, am I to use contrasting and comparing for either of these essays? I feel so totally lost when it came to Week 4 reading material on this topic. I have to say, because I haven 't been exposed, and using it on a daily, did I not grasp onto this

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