Based on the information above I feel that I have met many of my goals and I do feel proud knowing this because as a writer you always want to grow and develop new skills. I did not exactly follow my goals as planned for example when learning new words I did not use just the dictionary as planned I asked my mom for some choice words that would make my essay better and like the good mom she is she helped me. When meeting my goals I feel like I can achieve so much more in my writing. As semester two progressed I have came to learn that I still need improvement in some areas. I have came across an issue that I tend to make run on sentences and I also tend to put less commas in the places that is needed. I hope in the future after this class that I can remember the new techniques that I have learned this year and I hope my essays improve next year as much as they did this …show more content…
With the new skills I have learned I used them in mostly all my essays. In my cross roads essay since I have expanded my vocabulary I used that to my advantage in this essay. “When the decision was made, it was very hard to decide it was an impeccable decision and I had to be careful because if I choose the wrong career it can ruin my life.” This shows how the word impeccable is shown in this. If I have never learned this word I don’t think it would have been used in this essay to make it more sophisticated. I mentioned this piece because each piece of writing I use shows myself how much improvement I have made. I love getting a good grade to, but I want my essays to be memorable and I want to look back and be proud of myself from how far I came because I can a long way to get to this point. In the past I have had many series of issues involving a good old comma. When writing my primary research essay I feel as though my punctuation was on point. “she was afraid of objects such as: brooms, bats, and if you and somebody high fived it would deathly scare her,” I have came a long way with punctuation and to know I finally did something right feels amazing. This was included because I finally figured out the right way to use correct punctuation and that is a major milestone because I’ve had eras of not knowing that much in the punctuation concept, besides a period. Writing a killer opener is what I enjoy to do the most. When