In this short time, the author has to use an organizational flow that helps the reader stay engaged and interested. From the start, Etzioni displays a giant billboard for all to see; “Working at McDonald’s is bad for your kids.” This immediately gets the attention of the reader and soon follows with his use of comparing and contrasting. With each compare and contrast he builds the reader up with the positive traditional thoughts related to teens in the fast food workforce but then quickly dismisses all of it with studies and statistics. Each study and statistic broadens the reader’s knowledge on the topic which helps them form their own judgement on the issue. In conclusion, I believe that Etzioni’s essay thoroughly convinces me and has to ability to convince many others of his perspective on the matter of teenagers in the fast-food
In this short time, the author has to use an organizational flow that helps the reader stay engaged and interested. From the start, Etzioni displays a giant billboard for all to see; “Working at McDonald’s is bad for your kids.” This immediately gets the attention of the reader and soon follows with his use of comparing and contrasting. With each compare and contrast he builds the reader up with the positive traditional thoughts related to teens in the fast food workforce but then quickly dismisses all of it with studies and statistics. Each study and statistic broadens the reader’s knowledge on the topic which helps them form their own judgement on the issue. In conclusion, I believe that Etzioni’s essay thoroughly convinces me and has to ability to convince many others of his perspective on the matter of teenagers in the fast-food