Rachel's Writing Style Analysis

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Luckily for me I was taught writing instruction by the world-renowned, William Shakespeare. Well, maybe not, although I did have teachers who were up to par on a Shakespeare level. My high school teachers were able to effectively teach their students to be prepared for writing in college. The writing instruction had started off simple and progressed throughout my high school career. The writing instruction received excelled during senior year, taught by Mrs. Billy Allison, and she made college preparedness her number one goal. Mrs. Allison had taught her students in a thorough way, she taught with construction feedback, she taught her students a variety of formal writing styles, and she taught all while encouraging her students. Mrs. Allison was exceptional at being thorough when it came to instruction. Because Mrs. Allison taught college English, she was aware of what the expectation was of students. With that being said, she did not want to leave room for any type of confusion in her classroom. As an …show more content…
One of the great qualities of Mrs. Allison as a teacher was her ability to encourage her students. Mrs. Allison would never belittle her students, or embarrass them in front of the class. She wouldn’t point out a student’s particular mistake. Another good quality was Mrs. Allison’s ability to push students toward their potential. As a teacher she wouldn’t make her students feel like they weren’t making any progress, she would always point out a student’s growth. Mrs. Allison always made time for her students. If a student needed help with anything, Mrs. Allison went out of her way to help a student understand better. There are some teachers out there who ridicule and embarrass students to the point where a student may not want to push themselves to improve their writing, and that’s why it is important to always encourage

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