Arnoldo roque
In the story, so I ain’t no good girl written by shorn flakes. I feel that the author gave a very interesting premise of love and abuse. This could have given very unique and complex characters but is unfortunately brought down, by its sloppy generic writing that is the characters and dialogue.
But before I get ahead of myself first you need to know what happened. So in the story I ain’t no good girl we see our protagonist, a girl that does not like the “good girls” because she is jealous of them as hinted by the story. As the story continues we get to see her boyfriend and we see that they stay together, even if it shouldn’t be like that. I’m Arnoldo Roque and this is my character critique.
Now 1st thing is The characters dialogue;
In the story, so I ain’t no good girl written by shorn flakes. I feel that the author gave a very interesting premise of love and abuse. This could have given very unique and complex characters but is unfortunately brought down, by its sloppy generic writing that is the characters and dialogue.
But before I get ahead of myself first you need to know what happened. So in the story I ain’t no good girl we see our protagonist, a girl that does not like the “good girls” because she is jealous of them as hinted by the story. As the story continues we get to see her boyfriend and we see that they stay together, even if it shouldn’t be like that. I’m Arnoldo Roque and this is my character critique.
Now 1st thing is The characters dialogue;