I Just Wanna Be Average Rhetorical Analysis

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High school is supposed to be some of the best moments of a kid’s life. In Mike Rose’s “I Just Wanna Be Average,” he talks about his experiences he encountered during his time on the vocational track, and while during college prep. Rhetorical appeals are efforts to persuade the reader by making them feel certain emotions. Rose informs his readers that the way the educational system ranks students has a drastic effect on whether they succeed or not. In Rose’s “I Just Wanna Be Average,” he uses ethical, logical, and emotional appeals to advance his claim to his

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