JOURNEY I. CONQUER THE BLANK PAGE Every time I want to start a writing, I like to think deep of what I am going to write and organize well. To persuade the reader is very important for me. I like to use examples based on real events or people. Many times I make a connection about my topic and my lifestyle or events that occur that related to the topic.
JOURNEY II. REVISING AN ESSAY Going back to what I wrote is very important. To change the errors and mistakes I made in my essay is good for me because I always be careful when I am writing. Reviewing my essay is one of my strategies. I always go back to the beginning and read it to myself before I turned it; if I have a time I like to add more information into my essay.
JOURNEY III. MAYBE …show more content…
BACKYARDS. This essay is a strong essay because it talks about that any new thing will become old one day even though it will take time. The essay made me to remember our home in Mogadishu and our new home in Atlanta. Our home in Somalia was big and its had a lot of spaces compared to our home in the U.S. which its small and it does not has a lot of spaces so the kids could play.
JOURNEY V. QUESTION 10. We like the four-day week is more persuasive to me because the essay is focused on the needs of the students. Time to study, to understand and to prepare for the class is needed, having a three-day weekend is great thing for many students. As student I like four-day week because it gives me the time I needed to get prepare and study for my class, so I would come to the class very good understanding of what the teacher would recover.
JOURNEY VI. WHAT IS POVERTY? As Goodwin Parker mention, poverty is “being tired” of all things. The essay is well organized and touchy. It showed the hardship of poor people face in their daily basis. It makes you go out and help all the poor people as much as you can. It makes you think twice about homeless people asking for help in front of stores and malls to help them and give them what you can. Yes there are people who help the poor ones but it is not …show more content…
Somalia is in civil war since 1991. The civil war claimed the lives of millions of civilians. The horrors of this tragedy have never got away. The U.S. and their allies came in Somalia in 1992, and they arrived in boats. Just months after the war that took down the military government. After the U.S. left country, the civil war peaked it highest. Murder, looting, and robberies became a daily basis. Education was limited before the U.S. invaded the country’s education was free for all kids until graduating high school. When I was fifth grade, I remember going to the school knowing that my parents didn’t make the payment. I stood outside hoping to get sympathy from my teachers wishing that they would let me in that day. I told myself, “Maybe if the Americans wouldn’t come, you wouldn’t stand here.” This argument paper is important to me because many people lost their lives defending their country and many went against them. Even though the U.S.took many refugees from Somalia to American land, but the homeland will never be the same again. Many generations affect the war including
JOURNEY II. REVISING AN ESSAY Going back to what I wrote is very important. To change the errors and mistakes I made in my essay is good for me because I always be careful when I am writing. Reviewing my essay is one of my strategies. I always go back to the beginning and read it to myself before I turned it; if I have a time I like to add more information into my essay.
JOURNEY III. MAYBE …show more content…
BACKYARDS. This essay is a strong essay because it talks about that any new thing will become old one day even though it will take time. The essay made me to remember our home in Mogadishu and our new home in Atlanta. Our home in Somalia was big and its had a lot of spaces compared to our home in the U.S. which its small and it does not has a lot of spaces so the kids could play.
JOURNEY V. QUESTION 10. We like the four-day week is more persuasive to me because the essay is focused on the needs of the students. Time to study, to understand and to prepare for the class is needed, having a three-day weekend is great thing for many students. As student I like four-day week because it gives me the time I needed to get prepare and study for my class, so I would come to the class very good understanding of what the teacher would recover.
JOURNEY VI. WHAT IS POVERTY? As Goodwin Parker mention, poverty is “being tired” of all things. The essay is well organized and touchy. It showed the hardship of poor people face in their daily basis. It makes you go out and help all the poor people as much as you can. It makes you think twice about homeless people asking for help in front of stores and malls to help them and give them what you can. Yes there are people who help the poor ones but it is not …show more content…
Somalia is in civil war since 1991. The civil war claimed the lives of millions of civilians. The horrors of this tragedy have never got away. The U.S. and their allies came in Somalia in 1992, and they arrived in boats. Just months after the war that took down the military government. After the U.S. left country, the civil war peaked it highest. Murder, looting, and robberies became a daily basis. Education was limited before the U.S. invaded the country’s education was free for all kids until graduating high school. When I was fifth grade, I remember going to the school knowing that my parents didn’t make the payment. I stood outside hoping to get sympathy from my teachers wishing that they would let me in that day. I told myself, “Maybe if the Americans wouldn’t come, you wouldn’t stand here.” This argument paper is important to me because many people lost their lives defending their country and many went against them. Even though the U.S.took many refugees from Somalia to American land, but the homeland will never be the same again. Many generations affect the war including