Hi, Patrick!
Your document is detailed and to the point. In many ways, I can relate to your paper. Such as, I am an ex-military soldier. I can honestly say, the military trained me how to be disciplined and prepared. On the other hand, you are a go-getter, and you continue to strive for academic achievement. In a whole, I enjoyed every aspect of this article and without a doubt, I foresee a bright future in your path.
Your document is detailed and to the point. In many ways, I can relate to your paper. Such as, I am an ex-military soldier. I can honestly say, the military trained me how to be disciplined and prepared. On the other hand, you are a go-getter, and you continue to strive for academic achievement. In a whole, I enjoyed every aspect of this article and without a doubt, I foresee a bright future in your path.