Hullo !-Personal Narrative

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Hullo! Been a while huh (like 3 years). Wow, I bet some of you are cursing me for not updating faster and I am going to be honest here: I do not have a good excuse for not updating. I got bored, I got stuck, and I forgot about this story and never got back to it until now. Even now I don’t know how much I will be continuing this story (random updates is what you will probably get). I still have not finished revising the other chapters but for some reason I suddenly got inspiration for this chapter so yeah.

I will be going to college in August (we grow up so fast * sob *) and I really don’t know what else to say… awkward moment.

I do not own anything (well besides Ellie) – it belongs to their respective owners. (By the way, can anyone
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I open my mouth to say something about Alice’s memory or lack there of, when the Hatter speaks of Frabjous day. Remembering the scroll, I go to ask him about it but am quickly interrupted by the letter m. Humph.

“Have you any idea why a raven is like a writing desk?” He whispers then shouts something that I am not able to catch.

“Sorry down with what?”

“Down with the bloody big head, the bloody big head being the Red Queen.” Chessur states. I had almost forgotten about him and resolved to not forget any more people lest they be offended.

“It’s tick...TICKING!!!” I glanced from Chess to the watch as tea drops fell to the table, the Hatter and Chessur still in a discussion that was getting heated. Hatter stood up and started shouting at Chessur, the circles under his eyes getting darker and his eyes changing while Chessur looked on like an innocent kitten in trouble.

“HATTER” Mallymkun said while having a spoon in both hands, like she could hit him with. Despite her size she looked every inch (literally) like a mother
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My mind was racing. He had seen me, why didn’t he say something or take me away. It is obvious that he was looking for us so why? I feel some of my dress being taken away and I wait with Alice who has a blush on her face… Oh Alice, sweet, innocent Alice. Two dresses drop from nimble fingers and we change into them. Knocking on the top of the teapot, Hatter pulls us out and sets us down along with the teapot. He grimaces at his work, not realizing that it is amazing even though it isn’t a great style dress on us.

“Best take her to the White Queen, they’ll be safe there. Spoon.” The March Hare gives a hysterical laugh as the Hatter puts his hat in front of us.

“Your carriage my ladies.” I quickly got on, adrenaline pumping through me. Alice takes some convincing and we leave quickly. I glance back and smile at Mallymkun, hopping she isn’t too sad that she doesn’t get to come with us.

And that is all she wrote. Hope you enjoyed it. I have a very hard time with tenses so I apologize if I switched tense at any point in time (I swear I don’t mean it). I don’t know when I will update next. If anyone is reading this, thank you for everything (including being patient, waiting, not insulting me or my writing, for reviewing, and much

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