How To Write An Alternate Ending To Mr. Whitman's Death?

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The full moon could be seen tonight in this peaceful town of Springfield, the wind breeze is carrying sweet scent,the ocean waves hitting against the rocks,the farm field lays ahead and dancing in the soft breeze,the clear night sky consuming the horizon,the citizen sleeping in a sound sleep;Who would've known that this peaceful night would be ruined by an accident.

It was 3.00 clock in the midnight,Mr.Whitman was going home from his late work.All of a sudden he came to a stop,his eyes wide and surprised.In front of his eyes lays a crashed car.'How did something like this happened?'murmured Mr.Whitman to himself as he rushed to see if anybody was alive.He stopped midway as he saw a child sitting there,'poor kid,maybe he lost someone valuable to him'said Mr.Whitman.Mr.Whitman touched the shoulder of the boy and said 'You okay there?', the boy slowly turned around.Mr.Whitman took a step back in
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urprise as he looked at the boy 'Oh boy,you look really injured let's get you to a hospital' said Mr.Whitman to the boy.Half of the boy's face was covered in red blood,his hand and shirt are soaked in blood.Mr.Whitman took a step closer to get the boy but he stopped as he looked at the boy's left hand.The boy was holding what seems to look like a hand in his hand.'What is that in your hand?'said Mr.Whitman in a concerned voice.The boy looked at the object he is holding on his left hand and took a bite from the object which seems to be a hand of one of the person from the car.Mr.Whitman's eyes now showed fear as he tried to back up from the boy 'W...what did you just do?,what are you,a monster?' said Mr.Whitman,his voice tone now rising.The boy looked at Mr.Whitman and took a step near him,and he started to walk toward Mr.Whitman.'Stop,I said stop,I will call the police if you come any more closer'said Mr.Whitman in a scared tone.Mr.Whitman looked to his right and left and saw a tree branch lying on the ground,he picked it up and took a swing at the boy but he gradually missed

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