I would like to talk to you about the ad you sent me. It was very good but I have a few suggestions for you.
I really liked how you used the ad to connect to the reader's emotions by making them happy about the food. I liked the layout you used and how you made the picture big and put very few words. I like how you used the slogan to compare it to delivery pizza. It says a lot about the type of pizza and the brand.
I think the ad could use a little bit more description of what the pizza is like. You could go into detail about to different types of pizza they have. You could also go into detail on how the pizza is made or how it was made by professionals. If you wanted you could even get real people to tell you if they liked it