“Whoosh, crash Hi, i’m Kate sorry I am running really fast away from the guards maybe I should start from the beginning so keep reading if you want me to tell you about the time I was trapped in a forcefield and my dad was brainwashed and how I survived!”
To begin, this is my coach Mr. Jacks he has been with me as we have fought it first starts out as a question who and why we just ended up in a force field for no reason, that we know of. Anyways I find a way out with a mirror I had it reflected the forcefield, where I could escape. I left it there for others to get out and there came Mr. Jacks. We were about to run to the next forcefield to get out to get to our families. (T) Until I saw a man with a white coat, I think thats got to have …show more content…
Jacks followed. We went to the machine and smashed it up. “crack, choosh, stomp.” Every piece of equipment that guy had. (T) While Mr. Jacks was taking on the guards and the doctors. I was helping my dad he was back to being his sweet self but confused on whats going on. I explained everything pretty fast but I told him we had to go. “WAIT!” yelled my dad then he pressed this red button which made all the forcefields go away, then we made a run for it along with 5 thousand other people. We ran as fast as we could… the guards got some people but my dad, Mr. Jacks , and I made it out we met up with our families. they explained everything to us! The government wanted us to not over throw them so they locked us up pick one average man to control the world , but he would be under their control. “That was almost dad.” I explained. “cool!” says my little sister.
Knowing that we survived this awful tragedy it made us extremely grateful. Everyone that escaped over threw the government and we paid off all the damage and I learned that we deserve freedom and that no one can take that away. We will fight and fight to the very last breath. I know now that the world can be a dangerous place an that I am not welcomed, but I will make my self welcomed and live on forever and now I am a hero and I will fight for my
To begin, this is my coach Mr. Jacks he has been with me as we have fought it first starts out as a question who and why we just ended up in a force field for no reason, that we know of. Anyways I find a way out with a mirror I had it reflected the forcefield, where I could escape. I left it there for others to get out and there came Mr. Jacks. We were about to run to the next forcefield to get out to get to our families. (T) Until I saw a man with a white coat, I think thats got to have …show more content…
Jacks followed. We went to the machine and smashed it up. “crack, choosh, stomp.” Every piece of equipment that guy had. (T) While Mr. Jacks was taking on the guards and the doctors. I was helping my dad he was back to being his sweet self but confused on whats going on. I explained everything pretty fast but I told him we had to go. “WAIT!” yelled my dad then he pressed this red button which made all the forcefields go away, then we made a run for it along with 5 thousand other people. We ran as fast as we could… the guards got some people but my dad, Mr. Jacks , and I made it out we met up with our families. they explained everything to us! The government wanted us to not over throw them so they locked us up pick one average man to control the world , but he would be under their control. “That was almost dad.” I explained. “cool!” says my little sister.
Knowing that we survived this awful tragedy it made us extremely grateful. Everyone that escaped over threw the government and we paid off all the damage and I learned that we deserve freedom and that no one can take that away. We will fight and fight to the very last breath. I know now that the world can be a dangerous place an that I am not welcomed, but I will make my self welcomed and live on forever and now I am a hero and I will fight for my