Personal Narrative-Mucky Creek

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Introduction:

It was hard to tramp our barefoot through the muck in our stunning, not so appealing creek. Dodging muck balls, “splat!,” the muck hit me in the face. Fish swimming between our toes. Finding hidden treasures. Jumping over rocks, stepping in the sand and especially having fun running our bare feet through the mucky water. And especially swinging moss around like a lasso so we could hit each other in the face.

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“Yuck!,” why did you throw mud in my hair?

My sister and I were having a mud fight, playing in the creek with the frogs, fish, and snakes. We were also searching for concealed treasures in the deep murky water of casa creek. We find treasures on our 6 acres of land that my family owns. We have found
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We were playing in the creek, all things good until I was going to step out of the creek. A stick was protruding out of the wet, mucky sand and bam half of the stick punctured its way into my left foot. I bounced my way out of the creek in contact with my towel. Luckily my nanny, Rachel, was a certified E.M.T. and she took it out with no harm done. My other nanny and my sister, Alexis, didn't even know what was going on except for my little fake OW! It actually didn’t hurt. Well it ends up that an infection started. At 8:00 p.m. my Mom had to take me to the Emergency Room where I had to get a Tetanus shot and antibiotics. I started wearing water shoes from that point …show more content…
My wish came true. We volleyball and I had to hop the whole time. And didn’t have any shoes on again and we have 4 dogs in a fenced in area and I was going to get a ball and I steeped my right foot in dog poop. Once again another accident with no shoes on. That time I didn’t have any injuries at least. And we continued playing like nothing happened to me that day. The day was normal, thinking it would be fine for the rest of the day.

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