How To Write A Narrative Essay About Fishing

It was so hot today, I could practically hear death call my name (personification). I was, standing over the first fish that I caught, thinking to myself, “fishing is funner than I thought”. I had just caught a 4 inch sunfish with a cane pole of all things. I kept thinking “omg, omg, omg omg”. After about 5 minutes of thinking about this cool fish and how I was going to show it to my Uncle Jimmy and let him say “nice buddy, catch another big one”, but then I realized that the fish was dying because it was not in the water, so I quickly rushed it back to the water, even though I was going to show my Uncle. I didn’t get the fish back to the water fast enough, so I stood there as the fish lay limp, and it smelled like that wormy smell that you smell after it rains (appeal to smell). I started crying and put it down and ran to my mom. I took one last look at Beaver Dam lake and it was as peaceful as a mirror (metaphor). …show more content…
I immediately looked at my bobber and it wasn’t floating, so I gave my pole a tug just to make sure it was still there, and sure enough, the bobber came up for a few seconds, and immediately went down. So I gave the pole a little tug to set the hook on the fish. It was getting hard to reel in the fish, but when it got closer, I realized it was probably a 11 or 12 inch catfish. My little sister ran and got the fishing net because she knew I was going to need it obviously. When I got the fish close enough for my little sister to put the net under the catfish, the line broke and the fish landed in the net, not in the water, thank god. I think that fishing changed me because I now love being outdoors instead of being inside most of the time playing video