My research essay about how mud can hurt a horses health, like most essays, has its own strengths and weaknesses. By answering the questions provided to me, from the in-lesson chart, I was able to open my eyes to more things that could be improved before submitting a final essay to my teacher. Is your thesis statement clearly expressed in the introduction? Yes, my thesis statement is clearly expressed in my introduction. My thesis also relates to all of the paragraphs that follow the introduction. Is your writing lively and engaging? I feel that while my essay would be interesting and engaging to equestrians, I could work harder to make the information more appealing to people who are uninterested in horses and their health.
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