Through the repetitious practice of analyzing a text and drafting a condense and specific proposition, my own thesis construction has improved tremendously since my high school writing career. I can now create a specific, single-barreled thesis. This is perfectly exemplified in the difference between my proposition in my baseline document “Staying true to you and not conforming to society is key to finding inner peace and one must be brave enough to show the world who they truly are in order to achieve happiness,” which is clearly a two-part thesis where the first part can be proved true and the second part could be proved false. After weeks of practice in writing seminar I am now able to create a much stronger and precise thesis as seen in my literary review, “thus the shifting from one state to another affects the recall of information.” Here there is only one idea being
Through the repetitious practice of analyzing a text and drafting a condense and specific proposition, my own thesis construction has improved tremendously since my high school writing career. I can now create a specific, single-barreled thesis. This is perfectly exemplified in the difference between my proposition in my baseline document “Staying true to you and not conforming to society is key to finding inner peace and one must be brave enough to show the world who they truly are in order to achieve happiness,” which is clearly a two-part thesis where the first part can be proved true and the second part could be proved false. After weeks of practice in writing seminar I am now able to create a much stronger and precise thesis as seen in my literary review, “thus the shifting from one state to another affects the recall of information.” Here there is only one idea being