I think that creating this assignment was tough for me because I haven’t had very many life changing events yet. Which I am sure I have had more but I just haven’t realized what they were as they were happening to me. Once I thought about it for a little bit I have always known that football changed me. So I think I could have done better on explaining how it had done just that in just a few short years.
I learned that I could use a lot of work and that I am not very good at giving detail or sticking to the point. I did not revise this paper because I didn’t have it turned in on time and I revised two of my papers already.
I learned that I could use a lot of work and that I am not very good at giving detail or sticking to the point. I did not revise this paper because I didn’t have it turned in on time and I revised two of my papers already.