“Down -- steadily down it crept… Down -- certainly, relentlessly down!” (Poe 1) a quote from “The Pit and the Pendulum” the word “down” repeats four times in the quote to emphasize the pendulum’s movement moving closer to the tied-down narrator. The word “down” brings tension into the story by creating feelings of terror to the reader’s every time the word “down” is used the narrator gets closer to death. …show more content…
The author, Edgar Allan Poe, uses diction to create tension and build fear in the story of whether the narrator will survive the pendulum. Poe used tension to describe the pendulum moving down and getting closer to the narrator. The diction helped create the tension in the story because diction has the power to create intense emotion. The words “down”, “I”, etc. enables Poe to complete his objective of the “single effect” of tension. Poe used the “single effect” of tension to make the readers feel anticipation from the suspense of the outcome of the plot. In addition, the diction that Poe used in “The Pit and the Pendulum” influenced the the tension and suspense causing the “single effect”. Overall, diction and tension, create a story where readers become compelled by the story, but the true mastermind behind the tension and horror so the story is Edgar Allan