Holes: A Short Story

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We walked onto the door-step and randomly shrunk, then we shot down a hole in the ground. AHHHH!!!! BAM! Owwww. I think this is a trap! How do we get out? (Asked Makenzie Curiously) I don’t know or we would have been done out of here!! Well i am going to go to sleep. Colorado has already ((Hit The Hay!)) So, I should probably should get some shut-eye to. Night Kali Yawned ((Mackenzie.)) ((Morning)) (Stretch) Ahhhh…. Morning girl’s Mackenzie! Colorado! Oh, (Laugh) you guys are still asleep! (Laugh altogether) And (correction) you mean we ((WERE) asleep they exclaimed! Well, maybe this will cheer you guys up! I found a hole in the wall that I am pretty sure we can fit through! What! How! When! I got up and seen it! And I found it this morning! Guys What are we waiting for let’s go!!! ((we squirm through hole)) Freedom!! ((shouted Makenzie)) SHHHHHH!!! We don’t know if someone lives here or not! Ok…. ((sadly replied Makenzie)) (Sighing) Ok So, let’s explore! (shouted Makenzie) (Makenzie runs off) MAKENZIE GRACE LEWIS GET BACK HERE!!!!!!!! …show more content…
Nope, (Colorado mumbled) Ok, but she is our BFF so we have to find her! Colorado look with me! Okay (mumble) Hmmmm, if I were a kid running around a mysterious place, where would I go? I don’t know where she is, we just gotta find out where she is at. BAM! AH!!! What! Where are we! (weeped Colorado) I think someone locked us in here!! (stand back you hideous beast!) A familiar voice shouted. Colorado! Hide in the closet quick! I grabbed the nearest item, (a coat hanger) WAIT IT”S MACKENZIE!!! (i run to her and hug her) Oh i’m so glad it’s you, how about you say we get out of this house? YES Please! I Think we’ve been exploring here long enough. Yep, (Colorado's tummy growls) And, Can we get some food to? Yes, Colorado We can go eat! YAY! Can we eat at Mcdonalds!? Sure. (I replied) HOORAY!!
(SO THE 3 BFF’S WALKED TO MCDONALD'S HAPPILY EVER AFTER,) THE END (PS:and made it out

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