The ordinary world: Mark is a 40 year old married and retired engineer, living with his wife and son along the city of Harare in Zimbabwe. He is an unfortunate man who cannot produce enough for a decent living, he trains the cricket team in order to gain enough money for his son Jacob to attend school; his goal was to be known for creating the best cricket team in the whole of Harare, but he was not admired for his dark, horrifying and violent attitude towards others, especially when using use force against his team.
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The internal conflict used such as “unconsciously Mark could hallucinate two faces forcing
him”, is able to represent what is happening within the mind of the main character, it presents a
brief and concise understanding to how depraved the character is feeling in such a dangerous
situation. Whereas the external conflict used through sentences such as “get up n fight me before
u leave, u come all this way”, allows to process the thought of conflicts within the story, it shows
a brief development of who opposes the main character and who allowed to process the greatest
fear being triggered.
Creative Piece (Abyss):
After a long devastating and fatiguing journey, Mark has reached his final destination. He