Hanzel And Gretel's Cabin: A Narrative Fiction

Once upon a time when people thought kids were truly annoying brats. And I mean literally that annoying to the point where parents abandoned their kids. Hanzel and Gretel were one of those kids. They were kicked out because Hanzel said potatoes like po-tot-e-oes, and Gretel because she made chocolate foods out of something that looked like chocolate, but was not chocolate.. Regardless, they never gave up, and one day they found a cabin, made out of vegetables that had a sign that says “Come on in!”
“Trap” Hanzel mumbled
“Ew” gretel said with a slight tone of disgust
Just as they were about to pass a screeching voice yelled “WAIT!”
They glanced over to see a very irregular looking man. He was wearing a green, neon shirt that read “Witches are …show more content…
Yep! That's just about my entire life story”
“Um… well… okay, now i’ll tell you about us” Hanzel spoke a little confused
“Gretel and I were born in a small house somewhere around this area, as we grew up, Ma and Pa got more and more tense and irritated with us. So after a while Pa led us through the woods, but when we looked back, he was gone! Then we shuffled around the woods, and then we found your cabin. And now we're here.”
“Woah man… that's deep… why don't you get some rest, it’ll be a busy morning…” He whispered suspiciously.
So they got their sleep, but Gretel heard a noise. She woke up and saw a rabbit, adorable Gretel thought Then the rabbit then ate a carrot, but then things got ghastly. The rabbit started shaking, and started turning orange! And then... A carrot! Gretel almost screamed out of pure fear, and then a shadowy figure appeared and ATE the rabbit! And then walked up to Gretel and …show more content…
A. Word,” He growled “if you talk, you're going to BE a vegetable.
Next morning, Hanzel and Gretel woke up to the smell of fried onions. “Wake up kids, try my specialty onions. I usually only have them on Special Occasions, hehehe.” The witch said suspiciously
“Uh, we have to use the bathroom outside” muttered Gretel
Outside, the glistening sun was peaking over the horizon, the navy blue lake was shimmering, robins chirped, and the fresh pine tree smell filled the air. This seems… Natural... Gretel thought. “Why'd we have to go out here?” Hanzel murmured “Hanzel, we need to leave. Now” Gretel whispered “Ugh, why?” He said half awake “Because his vegetables turns things into vegetables!” She yelled “And-” “Tisk, tisk, tisk,” came a familiar voice “that was not so groovy man, now I gotta turn you two into vegetables..” “RUN!” Hollered Gretel
Now, I'm just gonna say this, it's HARD to run in sandals. In no time the kids got away from the witch, even though the witch turned everything in its path to vegetables.
Nonetheless, the kids managed to get away, and found a normal house, with normal people, in a normal