Hanna's Murder: A Short Story

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It only took one bullet shot and she was dead on the floor. The blood was pouring from her head and dripping onto her bathroom floor. The sounds of the Ambulance and Police sirens were heard from miles away. The tape blocking the street * CRIME SCENE DO NOT CROSS * and the clues conflicting the murder were still an unsolved mystery. Who did it? Why? And How?

On October 3rd 2004 Hanna was at home preparing for a date with her College boyfriend when she suddenly received a call from Jake, otherwise known as her ex boyfriend. He was trying to get her back but fortunately for her she had already moved on. Little did she know he was a psychopath with anger management issues, so when Hanna broke the news to Jake about dating a new guy he didn't
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Hanna didn't open them until she got had been dropped off home. “ 24 unread messages “ Hanna flips her phone up and sees it from an anonymous number, she straight away thinks that its from Jake, leaving death threats. Is it from him ? Maybe its not. Hanna has her chin down to the floor as she is reading the messages.

Hanna quickly runs into the bathroom to wash her face hoping that it would all be a dream but as her head rose from the sink a gun shot was fired at her head. The anonymous Killer stormed out of the room to a place far away where would nothing can connect him to the murder.

Meanwhile in the car Paul is waiting for Hanna to come out as she was giving him a book to borrow. 5 Minuets…… 10Minuets……. 15 Minuets, Paul is starting to get worried so he enters into the house taking his phone with him in his pocket. Paul is yelling out to Hanna checking all the rooms until he reached the bathroom he turned the light on and saw Hanna’s body in dead with blood pouring out. Without hesitation Paul calls 911 and a few moments later they had
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They attended the room in which the shooting and crime scene happened which is her bathroom. “BINGO” They say Police officer Campbell has just found the gun in which the shooting had happened with. With a tissue they pick it up so their fingerprints don't get on it and put it straight into a clear plastic bag which will then be taken back to the station for inspection.Police officer Campbell found 2 phones one of them should be Paul's because he had dropped in underneath the sink. Officer Campbell picks up the phone a puts it in separate bags for

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