Gummy-Personal Narrative

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I got to my dad's, and saw my dad waiting to see me. I smiled, and hugged him. “Hi dad!” I smiled. He replied with a hello as well. I let go and saw my stepmom. “Hi Kim!” I smiled. She did the same as well. I put my school bag down on the couch, and went to the kitchen, my usual routine. I grabbed a water bottle, and gummy bears. I love gummy bears. I walked back into the living room, and saw that my dad had already left for work. He has two jobs. One in the morning, and one at night. I don’t get to see him a whole lot, but I will get used to it. At least I got to see him after school! He usually leaves before I get home. “Wanna watch a movie, Briana?” Kim asked. I nodded, as she put in a movie, while I munched on my gummy bears. The movie …show more content…
I got up, and put another movie in, for me to watch. Not fall asleep. I threw away the empty gummy bear bag, and drank the rest of my water, also throwing that away. I sat down on the couch, watching Bambi, when I heard a noise in the kitchen. It sounded like someone was moving around. But I was the only one here. Right? “Kim?” I asked. I didn’t hear anything else. Not even the same sound I heard before. I let it go, and focused on the movie once again. There it went again. I got up this time, and went to get another water. When I went in, nothing was there. Nothing moved. No one was in there. I grabbed my water, and walked back to the living room, feeling someone staring me down. I sat back down, as the sound got louder. My heartbeat was beating faster and faster each time I heard it. Right as I thought it would run out and attack me, the door opened. I screamed, as I felt a pair of arms wrap around me. “Briana? What’s wrong?” I sighed of relief, noticing it was only Kim. “I heard something in the kitchen.” And that’s when it happened again, long and loud. “I-it’s nothing. Come on. Help with the groceries.” I decided to do the same thing, and walked out with her, hearing the same noise

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