Hook: Love is very kind thing, but it very difficult to find in a person. love is very important in life because it combines two people and guides them to a better future. It can make or break lives and if love is true in both couple it can lead to happiness. So, Jarvis should choose his life partner very wisely for a better future.
Thesis: Jarvis should marry Gina instead Rose because Gina has a better career, she loves to watch football, and has a good personality.
Topic Sentence: In terms of career they both have good career, but Gina has a more stable career than Rose.
Introduction: Rose has pursued her career in sales marketing, so she works as a sales-women.
Evidence: Rose works for company called Holara. Her job is to go door to door and sell body spray. For example, her …show more content…
But to Jarvis that is a huge deal because football is really important to Jarvis. For example, Rose and Jarvis both like to do opposite things which not a good trait in a couple.
Analysis: Jarvis should avoid Rose because she hates the most important hobby of Jarvis and Rose hates football. This shows that rose really doesn’t care of Jarvis that much.
Introduction: While on the other hand, Gina also enjoys watching football and it is one of her personal favorite sport.
Evidence: Gina loves watching football games specially when the Seahawks are playing. This is a good thing because Jarvis also like the Seahawks. For example, Jarvis and Gina can go to the Seahawks game in Seattle. This won’t be a problem because Gina can get off work very easily and she will get very good seats too.
Analysis: Jarvis will be very happy with Gina because they are on the same page when it comes to interest. Gina really care for Jarvis’s hobby and admires things he is passionate about.
Topic Sentence: Gina’s personality surpasses Rose in many areas.
Introduction: Rose has a really dark sense of humor and she is very
Thesis: Jarvis should marry Gina instead Rose because Gina has a better career, she loves to watch football, and has a good personality.
Topic Sentence: In terms of career they both have good career, but Gina has a more stable career than Rose.
Introduction: Rose has pursued her career in sales marketing, so she works as a sales-women.
Evidence: Rose works for company called Holara. Her job is to go door to door and sell body spray. For example, her …show more content…
But to Jarvis that is a huge deal because football is really important to Jarvis. For example, Rose and Jarvis both like to do opposite things which not a good trait in a couple.
Analysis: Jarvis should avoid Rose because she hates the most important hobby of Jarvis and Rose hates football. This shows that rose really doesn’t care of Jarvis that much.
Introduction: While on the other hand, Gina also enjoys watching football and it is one of her personal favorite sport.
Evidence: Gina loves watching football games specially when the Seahawks are playing. This is a good thing because Jarvis also like the Seahawks. For example, Jarvis and Gina can go to the Seahawks game in Seattle. This won’t be a problem because Gina can get off work very easily and she will get very good seats too.
Analysis: Jarvis will be very happy with Gina because they are on the same page when it comes to interest. Gina really care for Jarvis’s hobby and admires things he is passionate about.
Topic Sentence: Gina’s personality surpasses Rose in many areas.
Introduction: Rose has a really dark sense of humor and she is very