There are many sentence errors in the essay that can be found and corrected with paperrater.com. looking at the guinea pigs. I really noticed this cute one that I really wanted, so I asked my mom if I could get one too. At first she had said no, but once she asked the worker how much they were. She had said I could get one …show more content…
I stormed over to the dog as fast as I could. Once I picked her up there was no heartbeat or anythin. She was dead. I was so sad I can't even explain how broken my heart was. While I was crying, all my cousins ran outside to see what was going on. They all saw me crying and asked me what was wrong. I explained what happened and they said “ who cares it's just guinea pig”. That really made me more upset. Shastin and I Dug up a grave and buried Josie. After that experience of losing something, I know now to remember that even though I'm being rushed I just have to sit there for 10 seconds and think, “Did I remember to do that?”. Never again will I leave my animal cage open for another animal to