Group Presentation Critique

Group Presentation Critique Our delivery was good, but like anything in life, could’ve been better. We worked hard and focused on transitioning from person to person smoothly, so that our transitions did not seem awkward. We made the mistake of not checking out what computer we’d be using and what we would need to bring in order to show our power point. This hindered our delivery because we had a tough time getting started. We also failed to try and run the video used in the presentation before the actual presentation, which caused us to run a little longer than the allotted time because we had to awkwardly pause in the middle of out presentation to figure out how to play the video. Overall, our group should’ve focused on practicing and testing the equipment out and our delivery would’ve been much smoother. Our introduction was probably the best part of our speech. Shouting the words “Get out of the bike lane!” was a great way to grab the audience’s attention. Once we had the audience’s attention , we also previewed the three main points we would be touching on within our presentation. Our transition to the first main point from the introduction also went fairly smooth. …show more content…
While we did an excellent job of transitioning, we had trouble getting our technology to cooperate. Because we had so much trouble getting our technology to work, I wish we had done a little better keeping the audience’s attention. We should’ve started doing an impromptu speech, while one of us worked on getting the technology rolling again when the video wasn’t playing properly. Overall, we did a good job of discussing our main points within the speech. We made sure we stayed on topic, and not strayed to fair away from our main points, despite the