Great job on your thesis statement, claims, and evidence in this week three discussion. So, I was reading your thesis statement, claims and evidence and I agree with Wilbert that officers should wear cameras on their vest to stop a lot of the hearsay situations because in an argumentative moment happens truth and lies get mixed up. For this reason, cameras will reveal what have led up to that action, even though in media that do not always happens. After, reading your claims and evidence, I agree with Trenton pointing out your second evidence on claim B is somewhat red herring. Overall, you did a great job on this discussion and I cannot wait to read your rough draft on week 4 discussion.
