Topic sentence /argum’t 1:
I. Family treatment can be seen in different perspectives; each individual perceive another’s words and actions in a different way than intended. Supporting Evidence: A. What her mother is saying can be taken in a different context as Connie and herself think in a different mindset. Paraphrase/Quotation: 1. “Why don’t you keep your room clean like your sister? How’ve you got your fixed-- what the hell stinks? You don’t see your sister using that junk.” (2)
Analysis / explication of supporting evidence and how it links to the topic sent. and to thesis.
How her mother is treating Connie may have caused an impact on Connie’s mindset as a mother’s role is to guide their children in a way that allows them to grow. …show more content…
The type of love that is to be expressed by Connie’s mother is different than what she expected as teens strive to be acknowledged and be praised by their parents.
The lack of control allows Connie to assert her demands. She will go as far as to lie into her mother’s face about the activities with males she has just met or stay home against her mother’s wishes.
At the same time, Connie’s mother may not have been good with her words as her role of a mother may have been hidden behind the terms she is using.
There is still affection in their relationship, but it is not explicit.
The reason she is very blunt with her words may be because she wants to protect Connie from the dangers of adulthood.
The words her mother says affects not only the relationship between her and Connie but also with her sister as she grows self-conscious from being compared to her. She has always been reminded that her sister will be the better one out of the two.
To not be accepted in the household would only lower Connie’s self-esteem as she would feel unworthy from the flaws she
I. Family treatment can be seen in different perspectives; each individual perceive another’s words and actions in a different way than intended. Supporting Evidence: A. What her mother is saying can be taken in a different context as Connie and herself think in a different mindset. Paraphrase/Quotation: 1. “Why don’t you keep your room clean like your sister? How’ve you got your fixed-- what the hell stinks? You don’t see your sister using that junk.” (2)
Analysis / explication of supporting evidence and how it links to the topic sent. and to thesis.
How her mother is treating Connie may have caused an impact on Connie’s mindset as a mother’s role is to guide their children in a way that allows them to grow. …show more content…
The type of love that is to be expressed by Connie’s mother is different than what she expected as teens strive to be acknowledged and be praised by their parents.
The lack of control allows Connie to assert her demands. She will go as far as to lie into her mother’s face about the activities with males she has just met or stay home against her mother’s wishes.
At the same time, Connie’s mother may not have been good with her words as her role of a mother may have been hidden behind the terms she is using.
There is still affection in their relationship, but it is not explicit.
The reason she is very blunt with her words may be because she wants to protect Connie from the dangers of adulthood.
The words her mother says affects not only the relationship between her and Connie but also with her sister as she grows self-conscious from being compared to her. She has always been reminded that her sister will be the better one out of the two.
To not be accepted in the household would only lower Connie’s self-esteem as she would feel unworthy from the flaws she