You Are The Vanguard Class Of 2020

Improved Essays
Portfolio Essay
“You are the Vanguard Class of 2020,” said Lieutenant Colonel Cross after a long first day at USMAPS. In July 20, 2016 this phrase did not mean much to me. I completely ignored the definition of what a vanguard is. By definition a vanguard is a group of people leading the way in new developments or ideas. After three semesters of rigorous academics and military bearing, I now understand and know what it feels like to be a part of the Vanguard Class of 2020. Throughout the course of this year I developed many learning skills in which will definitely help me succeed in my upcoming years downhill at USMA. In the beginning of the academic year, I did not like to read nor write. My grammar needed a lot of help. Therefore, the first semester I focused on specifically grammar and writing. The first paper I ever wrote and turned in for a grade at USMAPS received a 72%. Being Mr. Mediocre I was completely content with not failing. In all honesty, the Little Brown
…show more content…
My organization improved and my so did my vocabulary. The course reader is a book full of short stories and poems. Having read almost the entire book by now, I have obtain much knowledge in different ideas in American Literature. My favorite short story in the course reader is easily “The Open Boat,” although the ending is not to my liking it is an entertaining story about brotherhood and unity in order to survive. Second semester my class did not just read the story. We read it and had a group discussion all class about what happened in the story and took into account all the internal and external factors of each story. I will be honest and say I have never analyzed anything before this critically. It is absolutely incredible what one can analyze in a simple short story. By far my most entertaining and helpful way to read and learn what the author could be saying. I became a much better reader through this

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    Personal Narrative English was always tough for me personally, since the first grade. I had always struggle to get through the classes. It partially was due to my negative thinking of the class. My thoughts on the subject were that I was not skilled in writing.…

    • 923 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    During my junior year at Stephen Decatur High School, I was enrolled in American Literature with Mrs. Moore. At first I thought she was a hard teacher because she made us write a lot. I enjoyed writing creative pieces, but in her class she gave us a prompt or we had to analyze a text and prove how the author believed in the American Dream or not. The first essay we wrote I scored a 29 out of 30 and was proud of myself because English has not always been my strongest subject. Our next assignment was on The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald.…

    • 450 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    On the first day of class, I felt pretty confident about my level of skills as a writer, but little did I know there were a lot of aspects in my writing that could be improved. As time progressed and we learned more about colloquial language and little things I could change in my essays to further advance and improve my writing. Now, I feel even more confident about my writing and know that all of these little changes I can make in my writing create a better flow of ideas and a higher level of formality. I feel that throughout this semester I have been greatly challenged as a writer and have advanced the most that I ever have in writing within such a short period of time. I have put in a lot time and effort into this class in order to create…

    • 1166 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    The transition from High School can often times be very frustrating for students. L. Lennie Irvin opened my eyes to one of the bad habits I picked up on in High school. The habit of straying from the topic or theme could cause me to fail not only papers in English but my other courses as well. I personally had a hard time with English my first semester of college. In High school I was always at the top of my class and my teachers would tell me how great of a writer I was.…

    • 377 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Honestly, I am not a very motivated person. I tend to try hard in school for the sole purpose of receiving an A. I never had thought of learning as an activity, but rather a priority. A priority that exists once again, for the purpose of getting an A. In my head, if I received an A, I would feel secure and my life would be able to move along smoothly. Receive a B, and my whole world would stop. Sadly, it seemed almost impossible for me to receive even close to a B when it came to writing.…

    • 767 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    previously, before my junior year in high school I was not assigned any essays or critical writing assignments, however during my junior year our teacher assigned our class numerous essays, critical reading, and critical writing assignments. For the first assignment of the year my class was assigned a 2 page paper on the poem My Father Moved Through Dooms of Love by EE Cummings. Since I did not have any critical writing expirence I panicked, because I felt overwhelmed and I did not know where to start nor how to format my paper. On the assignment I received a failing grade, but my teacher gave me the opportunity to resubmit my essay, upon the resubmission my grade went from 54 to a 85 percent. Since my junior year my writing skills have…

    • 246 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Wow, it’s hard to believe this semester has already come to an end. When I first walked into English 102 this semester I wasn’t sure what to expect of this course, but I knew I would be challenged. Although before this course I knew how to write papers, I had trouble expressing my thoughts effectively in my writing. After this semester I feel have started to overcome the the struggle and I know it is because of the past essay assignments and class activities we did this semester.…

    • 1028 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I tried to do the best I can, but somehow I would also get a bad grade due to my poor grammer. I do not really have any problems with reading or writing of my own choice. I can still be a slow reader to this day, but not like I once was. I could write pages on pages of a topic I am drawn to. I could add more details as well.…

    • 875 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Great Essays

    It was easy for me to understand what was going on within the text since I was very interested in the storyline, but I was just looking at the surface. So coming face to face with this project I struggled with analyzing the situations that were happening. Not going to lie, I was highly discouraged when I received the feedback from my rough draft. I was told that my six pages of content were basically a literary analysis and not an analysis of rhetoric. It made me think that I was doing everything wrong…

    • 1036 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Decent Essays

    When asked to write about and describe myself I often have to stop and ask myself how would someone who knows me, describe me to someone who doesn’t know me at all. I feel unique would probably be the most fitting adjective for describing Robert Yamane. I enjoy being challenged and never walk away from a problem that I know I can solve. Puzzles are great examples, but more importantly I want to be challenged in the classroom. Which is a huge reason why I want to attend Punahou.…

    • 564 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Additionally, I have excelled in English and is continuing to excel. Leading up to my first ACT day in 11th grade i was taking ACT prep classes but because the scholars weren’t all ont he same page we had to learn from where they were. It was below the level i was on even if mine was at a 6th grade education. These classes were very easy from 9th to 10th and because it was so easy i wasn’t studying to make sure i knew the material 100%. My stubborness was a factor that contributed to the 14 i had gotten the first time i took the ACT in the English Section.…

    • 183 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Decent Essays

    My ability to read and to critically think has greatly improved this semester. This is due to the example texts which we read in class. Short stories and excerpts introduced me to different styles of writing and difficulty levels. As we discussed them in class, I found myself comparing them to other texts and thinking about the negatives and positives of each one. I have been able to apply this skill to my own, independent, reading, so that I now think critically of everything I read and read new genres as well.…

    • 92 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    It is a book that needs to be read with great attention and thinking to understand meanings and evaluate ideas critically. I personally like this book because it heavily relies on critical reasoning and logic that is back to back like dominos in a line. One point relies heavily on another, and the reader must follow along to understand how each idea connects to the next like each domino hits the…

    • 812 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    To be completely honest I have mixed feelings about writing and I don’t really have any memorable experiences that made me feel this way, it is just the experiences that I have had with the subject while trying to apply it. I struggle with what to write down mostly and creativity in general and I don’t really excel at any part of it. If I were to say I “excel” at anything it would be revising my work and adding to it. At the end of the semester I hope that I have relearned some key writing elements that lack of practice has caused me to lose.…

    • 761 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    A couple of months ago, I wrote about how I struggle to create an interesting hook that captures my professor’s attention. Here I am, multiple months later and I still struggle to write the perfect hook. Am I okay with that? Actually, yes, because I know I grew in many other areas during this course. I believe I have progressed more than I have in any other English class.…

    • 1320 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays