Goody-Two-Flow: A Narrative Fiction

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Goody-Two-Shoes couldn’t wait to meet her new roommates. Her mother was still best friends with her college roommate, and Goody hoped it would be the same for her. She took a deep breath and opened the door to her dorm. There was one bunk bed and one loft bed. One girl sat on the top bunk with her laptop, and the other girl was setting up pictures on the table next to the bottom bunk. The two girls had already claimed the bunk bed, so Goody would be on the loft bed. “Hello! I’m so glad I finally get to meet you!” Goody exclaimed while smiling. The girl setting up pictures turned to look at her, but the girl on her laptop didn’t look up. “Hey. I’m Go-With-The-Flow. You can just call me Flow.” The girl mumbled. “You can have the loft and the middle two drawers of the dresser beneath it.” …show more content…
She waited for the girl on the top bunk to talk, but after a while of silence, Goody decided to just start unpacking. Suddenly a girl burst into the room. “HEY! Our hall is getting together to meet each other, be outside in ONE MINUTE!” The girl yelled. “I’m good.” said the girl on her laptop. “You’re Solitary, right?” The yelling girl shot back. “Yeah, thats me.” “Well my name is Peppy, and I’m telling you right now, it’s good for you to get out there and meet some new people!” Flow and Goody walked into the hallway. After a few seconds Solitary grumbled and climbed down from the top bunk. As she left the room Peppy squealed and followed. There now was a big group of girls laughing and chatting. They started going around the circle telling their names and something about themselves. “I’m Dependence and I’m a freshman. I’m dating a wonderful guy named Controlling!” “Hey, I’m Bad Example. I have three little sisters, and personally, I’m here to party.” “I’m Vegan and I’m majoring in Astrology. I’m very connected to the

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