Goldi Ann Locks: A Short Story

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One sunny day in Gold City, A young girl is now a woman as she is turning eighteen on this special day. Goldi Ann Locks, is celebrating her eighteenth birthday with her mom and dad at their beautiful home in the Goldland suburbs.
“Goldi, now that you are a woman it is time for you to get a job, and move out.” said Mrs. Locks
“But Mom, I do not think I am ready for such a monumental step in life.” said Goldi
“I know but if you do not get started now, then you never will. I know some great real estate agencies you can look into.” said Mrs. Locks
Goldi did not know what to think. She was not ready, and she had never been alone before. Goldi was scared, but she knew she had no choice. As Mrs. Locks handed Goldi a list of the real estate agencies,
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Goldi had one problem though the house was empty, and it made Goldi feel empty. “I see that you like the home.” said Sugar “I do, but it is so empty.” said Goldi “Don’t worry Goldi, we will call Two Men and A Truck to move everything in tomorrow.” said Grizzly After Grizzly said this she decided she would come back and make her final decision after everything was moved in.
She could hardly wait, so the next morning she drove straight to the new house. She walked in and there everything was, her television, bed, couch, everything. But to Goldi it still just didn't feel like home.
“Goldi, how is it now?” said Grizzly
“It just doesn't feel like home.” said Goldi
“How about we throw a housewarming party?” said Sugar
“I think that’s a great idea to break in my house!” said Goldi So all Goldi’s friends came that night to her new house. One by one they flooded in first it was Red Riding Hood, then Rapunzel, and after that she couldn't even keep track. She of course noticed Sleeping Beauty sound asleep on the couch. After tons of laughs, eating, and conversations, Goldi felt like she was home. Goldi closed the door and made her way to the

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