Ghosts In The Mine: A Narrative Fiction

Improved Essays
In a closet in a room in the basement of my house lies a large chuck of raw copper. Corroded with a green and white patina, from its years of oxidation, the parts that still keep their brown color show no shine, and large blobs stick out of the sides that once connected it to the cave wall. When I would play in that room, I always thought that it was just some decoration, and I never knew the story behind it. Until one day mw and my dad were sitting around a camp fire and my brothers were asking for a story. I was expecting him to tell the same scary story he tell every time they ask this question, but this time he had something different to tell us. “Ok, I’ll tell you about the ghosts in the mine.” he spoke in his scary voice. “Back when …show more content…
We have found a good sized piece of copper attached to the wall with several jagged points. We were trying to detach it with things like a hammer and chisel, and a …show more content…
Then I dipped it in the water. The next time we came the mine I tried the chisel for a while, however heat treating also makes the metal more brittle and after only an hour or so it shattered. Then I remembered that my blow torch was in the car, the melting temperature of copper was 1,984 F, and my blow torch could reach that temperature. I ran outside grabbed my blow torch and held the flame up to one of the chucks holding it the wall. Twenty minutes later one of my friends shout “Jon! HEY JON, YOUR HAIR IS ON FIRE” A few minutes later I was back to work with the blowtorch, and with slightly less hair. However, I felt a part of the copper and it wasn’t even warm. I realized that there must be a giant chunk of copper behind the wall taking all of the heat. I called to my friends, “I going to take a Break,” and headed off to explore more of the caverns. I was walking down a strait passageway with about an inch of water. As I walk from up ahead for just a second I could heard something walking, and so I stopped. The walking stopped too. I looked ahead and I could see a white figure back down the passageway. I shouted to them

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    Jacob Tellas AP English Wang Restarted on 10/3/16 Ghosts With some knowledge of war, one can begin to appreciate Tim O’Brien’s “The Things They Carried”. Tim O’Brien is a veteran, as a result, there are many things he takes for granted and does not tell us, making us wonder if it is fact or fiction. America’s involvement in the Vietnam war resulted from internal domestic politics rather than from a national spirit. The soldiers were disembodied from the war, just like ghosts. O’Brien uses syntactic illusion to express the idea of ghosts thoroughly but indirectly, as to further convey the sinister nature of war.…

    • 1032 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Ghost Map Essay

    • 858 Words
    • 4 Pages

    The “The Ghost Map” is a book written by Steven Johnson, a well known science aurthorauthor. In the book, the author explains to us why urban planning is necessary to prevent deadly diseases, such as the deadly cholera outbreak. This book is a chronicle about an event that began on August 28, 1854, on Broad Street. A five-month-old infant named Frances Lewis, had developed diarrhea and exhaustion, which were both symptoms of cholera. Dr.William Rogers had taken care her, but she died within a few days.…

    • 858 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Ghost Map Summary

    • 618 Words
    • 3 Pages

    The Ghost Map, by Steven Johnson, is a fascinating, vivid, and compelling account of how London’s 1854 cholera epidemic shaped the field of epidemiology and profoundly impacted our understanding of cities and disease. The diligent and remarkably multidisciplinary work of physician John Snow and curate Henry Whitehead proved that scientific methods of investigation could be applied to medicine and human populations to solve problems in society, on both local and government-wide levels. After tracing all cases of cholera in the outbreak directly back to drinking water from a certain pump (the now-famous Broad Street pump), Snow successfully persuaded local authorities to remove the pump handle, preventing the infected water from reaching human…

    • 618 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Description Paragraph Traveling to Buffalo lake was an unforgettable memory; it was a weekend of our first family camping trip. As we got to the campsite we staring to unload then set up are tents for the night. I observed my dad as he set up his it seemed easy well I was mistaken. After several struggles I finally had set it up.…

    • 741 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Tahlequah Ghost Story

    • 535 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Summary/Paraphrase This ghost story is said to have occurred in 2002 at the graduate campus of Northeastern State University in Oklahoma. Northeastern State University came from the former Cherokee Indian Seminary (which may have heightened their senses to the alleged supernatural) campus in Tahlequah. The campus is said to have a ghostly past that dates back to the 1840s. The author said he was close to his last semester of graduate school and he was living in a dorm.…

    • 535 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    A treasure…. The Ghost Treasure to be more exact, was a legend that blossomed centuries ago. No one knows for certain how the legend sprouted, but its roots slowly spread across the land and into the lives of people and all walks of life. But as its reach extended, the original story became pollinated with new desires and new stories blossomed as a result. Craftsmen and Blacksmiths believe the treasure is a material of the highest quality, the only material capable of showing a skilled craftsman’s proficiency in its highest possible state, and immortalize their skills for eternity.…

    • 203 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Stalactites dripped water all over Alicia and Marion. It was moist, cold, and dark in Ovacaros Cave, at least that’s what they named it. Around twenty minutes ago, Alicia was taking a stroll through the jungle surrounding their hotel. They were staying in Vietnam, and were next door to each other. Alicia had become good friends with Marion, and told her immediately once she discovered the cave.…

    • 344 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    “During the day, I don’t believe in ghosts. At night, I’m a little more open-minded” said an unknown author. Like this author many people are on the fence on the existence of ghosts. Ghosts are most likely real because people have had interactions with them, they can be scientifically proven, and nobody can move on from unfinished business.…

    • 734 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Corn Maze Short Story

    • 458 Words
    • 2 Pages

    A long ago there was a curious boy and girl that were riding with their friends mom, to a corn Maze. The boy was very excited to go to his first corn maze, and the girl was excited to wander around the maze and jot down thoughts about their surroundings. As the car gentled to a stop, the friends looked out the foggy window to see a creepy shack sitting in what seemed the middle of nowhere, next to a corn maze. The children slowly adapted to their surroundings, and gathered the courage to see if there was a man at the old mossy covered shack. There was a gleaming golden bell at what looked like the front desk, although, when the boy with his quivering hand touched it, it was the sound of an old wind chime, broken down over all the years.…

    • 458 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Myth of the Cave, also known as the Allegory of the Cave, was written by Greek philosopher, Plato, in Book VII of The Republic. This piece was written to “compare the effect of education and the lack of it upon our human nature” (Kessler, 440), a dialogue between Plato’s brother, Glaucon, and his mentor, Socrates. In this chapter, Plato envisions the world as a dark cave, humans trapped as prisoners, and all of our experiences as shadows on a wall. Plato describes the cave like this, “imagine men to be living in an underground cave-like dwelling place, which has a way up to the light along its whole width, but the entrance is a long way up” (Kessler, 440).…

    • 1141 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Lidke Ghost On a cloudy Friday night Phito, and his wife, Carla was working late at Lidke Mill. But it wasn’t just Phito and Carla there, but, Carla noticed something shiny and moving down by the river. So without telling Phito she walked down by the river to see what it was. On her way down to the river, she saw that the thing wasn’t there anymore so she went back to her husband. The next Friday it was the same way as last time, it was very cloudy.…

    • 592 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Baseball Baseball has always been one of my favorite sports, and it will always be the longest sport I’ve played. A total of 9 years in Khoury league and 2 years in high school, so all in all I have been playing this sport almost all my life. I started baseball with the Red Bud T-ball team, the team had a count of 15 people including me and excluding the coaches. Those 15 kids playing on that team became some of my bestest friends and greatest teammates to have. Most of them ended up being with me until we couldn't play khoury league anymore, and then only about 3 or 5 of them played school ball with me.…

    • 1239 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Philosophy has always been concerned with the thoughts and feelings of people about issues and how they perceive certain things, what some people see as bad, others can see it as a good thing. This is where philosophy comes in, it offers analysis, constructions, and criticisms of arguments. Over the years, philosophers have written written different view points on life and its meaning, this essay looks at Socrates’ philosophical view on life and knowledge and compares it with Voltaire’s own views on happiness and enlightenment.…

    • 663 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Ghosts In Ancient Culture

    • 750 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Ghostology has a long and vivid history. Ghosts were first heard of in the sixteenth century until now. The word “ghost” originated from an ancient term, “gast”, in the evolved modern German language. As time went on, “ghost” became a significant for the disembodied spirit of a deceased person. The people of the ancient time where culturally brought with the understanding that the soul of a human's being survived bodily death and deserved a kind of sustenance in the afterlife based on the kind of life they had lived on earth, how their remains were burried, and how they were remembered by the living.…

    • 750 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Magnesium Oxide Lab Report

    • 1193 Words
    • 5 Pages

    We waited for the crucible to burn again to put the cover on again. We repeated this procedure until the magnesium doesn’t catch fire when the cover was removed. After that, we heated the covered crucible strongly for 5 minutes. After the wait, we turned off the Bunsen burner and let the crucible cool until it was warm to touch. To the cooled crucible, we added 10 drops of water.…

    • 1193 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays