Get Out Of The Pool: A Fictional Narrative

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Mr. and Ms. Lancaster were having breakfast in their dining room when they heard a loud noise. A car was approaching so the couple went in their backyard to see what was happening.
They just had the time to go back in their house when a red car landed in their brand new pool.
“Mark! Go call 9-1-1! I will go see if the people need help getting out of the car.”
As Ms. Lancaster dove in the pool, she saw something strange: the car was empty. She felt so chocked that she opened her mouth, letting water replace all the air she had in her lungs. She then swam back to the surface. Looking for fresh air. As she reached the surface, she realized she couldn’t get her head out of the water. It was like she was trapped in a bubble. She could hear her husband calling her.
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Get out of the pool! No one is in this car! What are you doing?”
She started screaming, not knowing how to escape this invisible prison. Her vision started blurring, but she could still hear

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