George Orwell's 1984 Alternate Ending

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I feel her sharp fangs pierce the flesh on my neck. Sucking the Blood strait from the vain. There was no selfcontrole to stop her only the smell off blood drawing her in. I stood helpless and screaming in pain. Being slowly drained.

She realised me and I fell to the cold concrete floor. Her mouth was covered in my blood as she wiped it away. My vision was fading to black. She knelt in front of me and held out her freshly bitten arm.

"Suck on it. It's gonna turn you but you'll live." I did as she said and drank the blood oozing out of her wrist. I swallowed and fell back becoming light headed.

When I came to, the mystery vampire lay next to me. She was still and not breathing she looked withered and grey no longer pale white but grey. I
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The white light blinding me when I opened my eyes. The shadow of a tall thin man stretch across my body. I met the eyes of Dr.Winston, his cold pale green eyes were anything but friendly and I tried to scream. All that came out was muffled sounds and it was no use. As I tried to free myself from the restraints I felt a burning sensation.

"Vervain covers those ropes. I wouldn't move to much." Winston spoke in deep,raspy and sinister voice. "Just lay still and this won't hurt." I listened and stilled my body. He cut my forearm open and started to study it. When he was done and put the skin back together and let me heal. Then he moved down to leg and did the same thing. Going down the right side of my body and up my left.

He got to my head and put a contraption in my eye. Pulling my eyelids apart and leaving them like that. He watched as my eyes moved around and my pupils expanded and contrasted. He fished around in his tools and pulled out a fresh scalpel.

"Don't scream to loud or I'll make it hurt worse." He told me and I was dazed over. The scalpel touched the white of my eye and cut in. He cut from the inner corner to the outer corner. As he did this I screamed and my throught felt raw. He poked and prodded my eye and when he was done allowed me to

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