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0nce upon a dark and stormy night, Ocean,Sally,Jax and Mark decided to explore an abandoned mansion rumored to be haunted.As they entered the creaking front door, a chill ran down their spines.little did they know,they were about to meet their worst nightmare.As the door slammed behind them and locked itself they felt shivers down their spines, the feeling of where escape is difficult / impossible. they slowly turned around with fear in their eyes. they turned back around to the eerie state of panic. As they searched for her,they stumbled upon a hidden basement, its walls adorned with sinister symbols.the air grew thick with malevolence,and their hearts pounded in their chests. Jax and Mark knew they had to find Ocean and escape, but the mansion seemed to have a mind of its own. …show more content…
They could hear Ocean's distant screams,pleading for help.Determined,they pressed on, facing their deepest fears. Finally, they reached the heart of the mansion,a room surrounded in darkness.there,they found Ocean,bound and terrified.but as they rushed to free her, the entity that hunted the mansion revealed itself.a grotesque creature with glowing eyes and razor-sharp claws emerged from the shadows. With every ounce of courage they had left, they fought back together and managed to escape the creature. They started to walk Down the long corridor And entered into another dark room Filled with cobwebs And sheets over the furniture As they were able to get relief and calm down from their excitement from that creature They heard scary sounds and creeks Coming from the dirt corner of the room Mark decided to investigate that dark corner He's slowly walked towards the darkness And found a small child slumped over Crying.The child was entered clothing Filthy dirty When Mark asked if he was okay and why he was crying the small child responded I'm scared of the monsters and he was that lives in the attic, He taunts me all the

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