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“C’mon do it, or you’re a chicken.” Those were the words that started the disaster. Now Bill and Joe find themselves fleeing for their lives.
It all started on a rather bitter day of August, when the clouds blotted out all sunlight. Down in the small town of Edgar, a group of children are chatting.
“Man, just our luck to live near that old insane asylum!”
“Ahh, it’s nothing to worry about, it's been abandoned for over 20 years” said a boy about 13 years of age, who goes by Joe.
“Well, if it's so abandoned, how about you spend the night in there.”
“No, are you kidding, why would I do that.”
“C’mon do it, or you’re a chicken.”
It was those words that finally made Joe crack.
“Fine, but I get to take one friend.¨
The effect was instantaneous.
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It seemed to be coming closer, lurking in the shadows. The boys could clearly see the rotting arm of the human-like creature.
Joe then picked up a key and banged it against the lock, the rusty metal must’ve weakened, the lock flew off, and the pair hurried through the door. The sound of footsteps echoed through the room as the pair looked away. The creature banged on the door. There was no lock on the door now, if the being could operate a latch, it would be free to roam the facility now. However, the banging on the door gave the pair hope that the beast wasn't very intelligent. Not knowing what to do, they ran, and ran fast. They both knew that it would be their demise if they couldn’t find another way out.
“There you are” said the same cold voice as before.
Joe turned and saw a wild-eyed man, wearing tattered clothes, blood dripping from his razor-sharp, deadly axe. Bill’s heart sunk, he remembered that the last people who came into the facility never came back. This insane man had gotten them.
The room was getting dark. Then it started to spin.
Joe fainted.
The next thing he knew, his head was bobbing up and down, then it hit something
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With a song by Twisted Sister in his head, he decided he was going to face that insane old coot once and for all. That one man had probably killed some of his friends and terrorized another. With these thoughts in his head, he sprang out of Bill’s arm. There was a kitchen nearby, he was almost certain that there was some knives fit for throwing in there. Without hesitation, Joe…
Told Bill his plan and ran for the door marked “exit” at the end of the hall.
Now, Bill was a kind person who would never murder, so he put into effect, a different plan. Right as the lunatic turned the corner, Bill, who was hidden behind a rather large and convenient plant, threw a rock, with precision, that hit the door, causing it to open, then close.
“I got you now” the man yelled as he ran out of the door. Bill then heard a thud and a yell as the man tripped over the rock and tumbled down the hill.
Bill decided that he should stay inside the asylum for a bit longer, just for more popularity in the group of friends. He entered a nearby room and flopped down on a chair.
Something like a colander then fell on Bill’s

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