I think Bruni did do the situation of high school students justice by putting out this article and giving his view on the topic; however, there are some areas of the article that could use refinement. Student’s opinions, descriptions of other texts that further explain the situation, and studies that show relations between sleep-deprivation and future developmental/growth problems would further improve his article and make it much more effective. “Today’s Exhausted Superkids” does thoroughly explain the situation present in high schools, but Bruni should give further explanation of related texts and include possible ways to get away from this stressful lifestyle, along with students’ responses on the topic, to further show how they are directly
I think Bruni did do the situation of high school students justice by putting out this article and giving his view on the topic; however, there are some areas of the article that could use refinement. Student’s opinions, descriptions of other texts that further explain the situation, and studies that show relations between sleep-deprivation and future developmental/growth problems would further improve his article and make it much more effective. “Today’s Exhausted Superkids” does thoroughly explain the situation present in high schools, but Bruni should give further explanation of related texts and include possible ways to get away from this stressful lifestyle, along with students’ responses on the topic, to further show how they are directly