Fragile: A Fictional Narrative

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Norris shrugged, his own lips having curled up into a tight smile. "Yes, Juvenile, though it's to be expected." Pausing, as he led her towards the vehicle, his eyes found hers. "Considering your lack of experience with men." As to whether she'd turned him on, the killer left that question unanswered, for if he'd denied it, that could have conflicted against the erection that tented his jeans. Though, if his arousal was due to Analise, or his anticipation of the night's events, was another matter entirely, he wasn't about to provide her with further ammunition, particularly as his mind swiftly focused on other, more important matters.

His previous victims had been taken in isolated areas, one snatched off the side of the road, the second followed
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For one, in particular, it certainly would be, and the killer's voice, lowered to a whisper as he placed the indicator on, and took a right into a parking lot, turning the headlights, and ingition off when he turned into a space at the very rear, under a broken street-lamp, and focused his intent blue eyes on Analise, and nodded a group of young women, dressed to the nines, make-up covering their faces, all smiling and giggling, as they awaited entrace. "One of them, maybe Analise?" Pete raised an eyebrow, and shrugged, before his gazed moved to another group of similar young women. "Or one of them. Your choice. How does it feel, knowing that, by the end of the night, an attractive young women, just like one of those, with parents who love her is going to be raped, tortured and murdered. Gone forever, her friends and loving parents, brutally murdered, any potential she had gone with her. Who knows, Analise, the woman could have been the one to develop a cure for cancer, but instead, in a few hours time, she'll be nothing but a ravaged, inaimnate piece of flesh, left to rot, and be devoured by wild animals. And it will be your doing?" Breaking eye contact, Pete unlatched his seatbelt, and opened the drivers side door, his pupils gleaming with excitement, when he stepped up, and peered back in at his companion. "Come on Analise, let's go play

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