Fishing: A Narrative Fiction

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He walks out the front door and sees her, looking up at the sky and standing in the middle the road, with the rain pouring down over her.

Her wet hair hugs her body like a long lost friend, the ice-cold crystal droplets clinging to her frosty skin and dampening her clothes, as she stares above. Its hard for him to tell why she ran out and it is even more difficult to discern between her tears and the rain on her face.

"Melinda what are you doing?" He yells out to her as lightning lights up the sky.
"Doesn't it just feel so calming... as if it will just wash your worries right away?" She laughs, extending her arms out.
"Melinda let's go inside before you catch a cold." He says walking out toward her. "We don't have the medicine to bring you
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I can't go in there and pretend like that man in there is my father." She mutters and then smiles.
"What the hell are you talking about?" He asks and then touches her shoulder.
"My father knows me better than that man does." She says looking over at him. "My father knows why I wanted to start fishing... he knows my birthday... he knows his anniversary like the back of his hand and would have never taken his ring off and slept with another woman, two years after her death or not... and he would of chase after me right now but he didn't because that man isn't him. He might look like him, but he is not my father."
"Mel... that man in there thought you were dead for the past two years." He says turning her to face him. "You thought he was dead and he is in there trying to connect with
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I really really tried Jim." She yells. "But he isn't my father. We are leaving tomorrow; tonight if we have to."
"Melinda you need to give him a chance to get to know you. again.." He says kissing her cheek. "You need to give him a chance."
"I tried! He's not my father. I can feel it Jim... I can feel that, that man isn't him." She says shaking her head. "Just let me stay here and die. Just let me stay here and finish my family tree. Please..."
"Why are you so stubborn Melinda? Why can't you just give the man a chance!" He yells. "I'm not letting you die. We're going inside."
"Jim put me down! I'm not going in there." She yells as I open the door and put her down.
"I don't care Melinda! I'm not letting you die from wanting to stand out in the rain for nothing." He says closing the door. "I know you're pissed and will probably not talk to me for 72 hours or so but it was worth it. I'm not losing you because of this."
"I'm glad you're not a complete idiot." She mutters and runs up the stairs.
"Melinda..." He says and then rubs his temples in small circles. "Why are you so stubborn?"
"She's like her mother." Her father says laughing while walking into the room.
"What?" Jim asks walking toward

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