make it known that it 's not just the wealthy - make the essay look at both sides of living sustainably to reach more of an audience (rich and poor) focus on how the lower class live unsustainably too lower class in developed countries - unsustainable because: eat a lot of processed foods live in energy inefficient houses they live this way because they either cannot afford or ignore sustainable products and services lower class in developing nations less unsustainable because many partake in organic farming (bc they dont have the money to use pesticides/fertilizers) but they still use a lot of resources because they have very high number of people per family to be able to work the land tie back into the topic of the essay by stating that no one is perfect when it comes to living sustainably - and it should be a goal for everyone to cut back with …show more content…
wealthy) in order to make it clear that everyone can live unsustainably theres a new movement among the wealthy to appear like they are living sustainably buying hybrid cars, changing their homes to solar energy, etc. in reality - this portion of the population lives more unsustainably because they have the choice of whether or not to cut back for the lower class, they live sustainably out of necessity, not choice focus shouldn 't be on who is more/less sustainable than the other, but how to influence everyone to live more sustainably
What Paragraph Will Do provide and disprove a counter argument counterargument: it is possible to live extravagant lives while also living sustainably make sure the reader knows that there is nothing wrong with being wealthy and having the opportunity to live grandiose however, the fact that it 's possible to live in a fashion where one’s always traveling and buying the newest things is not sustainable the money used to support this kind of living could do so much more if put to the right use of living