For the Revision Assignment, I chose to revise my film review because it was my lowest grade that I had on a writing assignment. I felt I could improve on a lot of sloppy errors I made and missed he first writing process by giving it a more keen editing and revision process. I really enjoyed this assignment because it allowed us as writers to express ourselves with more freedom than the other, more academic, assignments we’ve been prompted to write over the course of English Composition I and II. The first time I wrote this piece I followed the writing process of prewriting, writing, revision, then editing. I felt this was a strong paper content-wise. Where I went wrong was attempting to use too many words I normally wouldn’t write with such
