Paragraphs in the story use the repeated pattern of having the second and third sentence rhyme with the remaining sentences being varied in length giving the book a musical quality that serves to enhance the flow of the story (Tunnell, 2015, p.23).
Understatement is uses loosely at the end of the story when CJ explains that he is glad they came to the soup kitchen, this statement allows the reader to reflect on the rest of the book and the illustrations to understand why exactly he was glad to be there (Tunnell, 2015, p.24). Unexpected insights are the backbone of this story with the young CJ learning how his Nana 'can always see beauty where he never thought to look', this is the underlying motif of this story (Tunnell, 2015, p.25).
Weak writing is evident in the condescension of the story (Tunnell, 2015, p.26). Some of the story is over-explained which is an indication that the author believes that young readers cannot elaborate on concepts for themselves with less information (Tunnell, 2015,