After examining the feedback given to me on my research paper, I have considered some ways to help improve my writing. There are many different areas of a paper that need to be considered when writing. For instance, the tone, audience, grammar, ideas, and sources all are important aspects of a paper. I need to continue growing in each of these areas. When writing papers, I often times struggle with considering my audience and my tone. If I choose who my audience is and what message I want to send to my audience, then I will have a more focused paper. Having a more focused paper will allow me to refine and enhance the ideas that I want my paper to have. Also, I need to do a better job at editing my papers. I often have small mistakes that
