(Quote) “ It is common sense to take a method and try it. If it fails, admit it frankly and try another. But above all, try something!” (Background) This is a quote by Franklin D Roosevelt, who, with his administration helped the country out of the great depression. (Explanation) This quote means when you fail, you have to accept it and find a better solution. (Relationship) FDR found a solution to help the country out of the Great Depression. For example, he revived enterprise and found use of new land. (Thesis Statement) The response of FDR and his administration to the problems of The Great Depression were effective because they created the new deal programs, revived enterprise, and made better use of the country's land.
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(Transition) On the other hand, (Counter) There is evidence that is going against this statement. A way FDR helped the depression was proposing better use of land. (Supporting Evidence) He raised the price on agricultural products. (Example) “The task can be helped by the definite efforts to raise the values of agricultural products.” (Explanation) With a raise in agricultural products, stores and businesses would gain more money. (Transition) Another way FDR proposed better use of land is (Supporting Evidence) FDR helped stop the closing of homes and farms. (Example) “It can be helped by preventing realistically the tragedy of the growing loss through foreclosure of our small homes and farms.” (Explanation) Less Americans were losing their homes and farms.(Transition) A final example on how FDR proposed a better use of land was (Supporting Evidence) FDR promised people their rights, bank deposits, and a home. (Example) “The guarantee of bank deposits, the licensing of all industry, the acceptance of farm homes, and building mortgage.” (Explanation) FDR guaranteed people a place to live and banking, this helped Americans push through The Great Depression.
(Revised Thesis Statement) In conclusion, Franklin Delano Roosevelt and his administration worked to pull the country out of The Great Depression. (Acknowledge Opposite Side then Counter with Rebuttal) Some said his methods
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(Transition) On the other hand, (Counter) There is evidence that is going against this statement. A way FDR helped the depression was proposing better use of land. (Supporting Evidence) He raised the price on agricultural products. (Example) “The task can be helped by the definite efforts to raise the values of agricultural products.” (Explanation) With a raise in agricultural products, stores and businesses would gain more money. (Transition) Another way FDR proposed better use of land is (Supporting Evidence) FDR helped stop the closing of homes and farms. (Example) “It can be helped by preventing realistically the tragedy of the growing loss through foreclosure of our small homes and farms.” (Explanation) Less Americans were losing their homes and farms.(Transition) A final example on how FDR proposed a better use of land was (Supporting Evidence) FDR promised people their rights, bank deposits, and a home. (Example) “The guarantee of bank deposits, the licensing of all industry, the acceptance of farm homes, and building mortgage.” (Explanation) FDR guaranteed people a place to live and banking, this helped Americans push through The Great Depression.
(Revised Thesis Statement) In conclusion, Franklin Delano Roosevelt and his administration worked to pull the country out of The Great Depression. (Acknowledge Opposite Side then Counter with Rebuttal) Some said his methods