1. I feel the main thesis of your draft is that you chose Facebook as the best social media site for the residents to use. After you said "I was hoping that if Facebook was too overwhelming, Snapchat in its simplicity and friendlies would be right for them," I was then a little confused at what you felt was the best social media for the residents to use.
2. There were many good reasons in your essay of why Facebook would be the better choice, but I feel like you sometimes stated too many good things about Snapchat. If you talked more about why residents wouldn't like Snapchat compared to Facebook, then I think your argument would be stronger.
3. The essay was easy to follow and I did not have any problems with organization.
4. If I were
2. There were many good reasons in your essay of why Facebook would be the better choice, but I feel like you sometimes stated too many good things about Snapchat. If you talked more about why residents wouldn't like Snapchat compared to Facebook, then I think your argument would be stronger.
3. The essay was easy to follow and I did not have any problems with organization.
4. If I were