Experiential Writing Assignment Analysis

SGT Rhea, what a pleasure to read your essay, I really appreciate reading material that is well written, easy to read and that keeps the reader interested in the information you want to convey. In your experiential writing assignment, you clearly presented your views and effectively utilized your supporting references, in order to demonstrate what makes a strong leader, and the characteristics he/she must possess in order to be successful, and capable of supporting his/her command, and be able to execute the leader’s intent. Through your examples of how you directly supported your command, you were able to demonstrate the type of commitment, and dedication that is necessary to be an effective leader. You were proactive in taking control of situations that you considered substandard, and you were able to excel in making improvement not only to the operation of your aid-station, but potentially creating benefits to future patients. …show more content…
In my view, this type of operation requires more than one individual in order to be successful; you have your Platoon Leader and you have your medical provider no only to support you, but to help you find the best way to fulfill the commander’s intent. So, it was surprising to me, that you did not mention any of them in your explanation of the events. The one positive thing about your actions when trying to implement changes in the organization and operation of the aid-station, is the fact that you successfully delegated some the tasks to your subordinates, and effectively shared the responsibilities with fellow Non-Commisioned Officers (NCO). As a leader, you were successful at recognizing flaws and implementing actions through collaboration, which improved the conditions of the