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As far as peer response is concerned, I have absolutely no experience having it done by anyone other than my wife. I have never read another person’s writing and given my critique or suggestions of how it should be written.
As I watched A Peer Response Demonstration (2010) video, I found it very informative. I could see myself like the first person in the video. Like her, I wouldn’t want to be too critical because I would feel bad hurting someone’s feelings. I guess that is why I haven’t ever asked anyone but my wife to read my papers. Even though my wife is very honest with me, I know she loves me and is trying to help me be a better writer. After seeing the second peer response example, I understand there needs to be honesty to help

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