I have read your short story, The Lottery, and I find it to be well written. I especially enjoyed your use of foreshadowing, and irony in the story. Furthermore, I would like to also suggest one revision in the story.
The Lottery uses many examples of literary techniques. One example that I thought you used well was foreshadowing. For example, in the story the children gather piles of stones before the lottery begins. Later in the story the winner of the lottery gets stoned to death. Another example in the story is when Tessie wins the lottery and she is complaining that it isn't fair. Later in the story we find out why Tessie was complaining. In conclusion, I thought you used foreshadowing very well in your story.
I also enjoyed the way you
The Lottery uses many examples of literary techniques. One example that I thought you used well was foreshadowing. For example, in the story the children gather piles of stones before the lottery begins. Later in the story the winner of the lottery gets stoned to death. Another example in the story is when Tessie wins the lottery and she is complaining that it isn't fair. Later in the story we find out why Tessie was complaining. In conclusion, I thought you used foreshadowing very well in your story.
I also enjoyed the way you